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14 March 2013

Dancing To The National Anthem


This blog post shares one of the scenes in "Topless Delivery" that I had originally edited out of the book.  After months of careful deliberation, I decided to add the scene to the updated versions of the book.  The scene takes place on the oceanfront patio at Chad and Heather's wedding reception.  David had recorded the mini-concert by Pure Ecstasy and had just received permission from Michelle, the band's manager, to upload the video to his YouTube account.

I bring out my trusty laptop computer and set it up on a small round table on the oceanfront patio.  Once the setup is complete, I take the memory card from the video camera out of my pocket and insert it into the card reader on the side of my computer.  There is a strong wireless internet connection here.  Now that I've obtained Michelle's consent on behalf of the band, it's time to upload the Pure Ecstasy concert video to my YouTube.  Two minutes later, I see that the upload is successful.  Let's see how the video turned out.  
Ashley emerges from the Grand Ballroom and says, "Hi, sweetie.  Michelle told me that I'd find you out here uploading our performance onto YouTube.  I can hardly wait to see it myself."  
Because YouTube videos are limited to 10 minutes in length, I have to upload six different segments onto my account.  The first segment features my performance of "Dance Across the Sky," the song I had written for my future First Dance with Ashley.  Chad and Heather asked me to play it live for theirs.  Now, it's our turn to give it a spin.  
I click on the link and ask her, "Ashley, may I have this dance?" 
She touches my cheek and sweetly replies, "David, I'd be honored."  
It is not until we start dancing real slow and real close do I realize that I accidentally clicked on the link to my rendition of "O Canada", which I played in a slow string setting.  Weirdly enough, she doesn't seem to notice my little technical glitch, until she notices a tear in my eye.  
 Ashley wipes the tear from my face and sweetly asks, "Sentant un peu la nostalgie, sommes-nous?" Feeling a little homesick, are we?  
I softly reply, "Oui, un peu," as she wraps her arms even more tightly around me and kisses me.  Yes, a little.  
After a hot, deep kiss that causes her knees to buckle a little bit, she asks, "David, à quand remonte la dernière fois que vous avez visité Toronto?"  David, when was the last time you visited Toronto?  
I reply, "Ashley, il ya eu au moins dix ans despuis que je suis là."  It's been at least ten years since I've been there.   
She says, "Toronto est une ville magnifique.  J'adorerais y aller avec vous."  Toronto is such a beautiful city.  I'd love to go there with you.  
I kiss her and say, "J`ai hàte de vous montrer les endroits où j`ai grandi.  Peut-ètre que nous pouvons mème prendre un jeu des Blue Jays au Rogers Centre."  I look forward to showing you the places where I grew up.  Perhaps we can catch a Blue Jays game at Rogers Centre.
Reaching the laptop a few seconds later, I check my YouTube playlist and make sure that the segments of Pure Ecstasy's concerts were loaded in the correct order...and they were.  I click on the first segment, which features my song, "Dance Across the Sky." 
Upon hearing my piano intro, I gently take Ashley's hand and softly ask, "Ashley, Puis-je avoir cette danse?"  Ashley, may I have this dance?
 Her deep sapphire eyes light up as she sweetly, yet excitedly, replies, "Absolument!"  Absolutely!
 As we dance slowly and gracefully out here on the patio, we gaze into each other's eyes and lose all sense of time and space.  We don't notice that several other couples join us in what we thought was a very private dance.  We conclude this dance with a hot, deep kiss that leaves us both tripping.  Only when we hear them cheering are we aware of their presence.
Ashley laughs and says in a state of total disbelief , "I can't believe that we just danced to the national anthem of your former homeland."
Laughing as Ashley and I embrace tightly, I reply, "Oops! I clicked the wrong link...or could it just be a Freudian slip?"
Ashley says,  "Honey, I've yet to find a danceable rendition of 'The Star-Spangled Banner'.  Now that would be the ultimate power rock ballad!"
I pause for a moment and reply,  "I can imagine hearing it now, performed by Metallica on a CD titled, 'O Say Can You Rock, 'Till the Dawn's Early Light.'  It just wouldn't sound right without that James Hetfield growl.  However, I did hear a recording of 'O Canada' by Rush that sounded really cool."

You will notice a few parallels here in this scene.  Keep in mind that while David was born in Chicago, he was raised in Toronto and often thinks more like a Canadian than like an American.  As the National Anthem is performed before the start of a ball game, it is appropriate here because David and Ashley are starting a new phase in their relationship with David moving in with Ashley the following day.  It is known that  Ashley and David are both bilingual.  This is their first conversation with each other in French, although she has conversed in French with David's mother, who was born and raised in Montreal.   I like to refer to this scene as David's "Rosebud Moment".  If you have ever watched "Citizen Kane", you will know what I mean.
The idea for this scene came from a remark that the daughter of a lady I once dated had made to me about a song that her mother really liked.  I responded by saying, "That would be like dancing to the National Anthem", as that song held a special meaning in my own life as well.

27 January 2012

Questions About "Forever Autumn"


Q:        How did you choose the title, “Forever Autumn - The Myrtle Beach Experience Continues” for the sequel to “Topless Delivery - The Myrtle Beach Experience”?


A:        I took the name from the title of a favorite song by Justin Hayward off Jeff Wayne’s Musical Version of “War of the Worlds” . The title theme is the first song listed on my Online Soundtrack. Furthermore, I believe that “Topless Delivery II” would be a completely inappropriate title as Ashley no longer dances at strip clubs and David no longer delivers pizzas.


Q:        Why did you use metric measurements in your narratives?

A:        Please keep in mind that David Lawrence, our narrator, spent much of his childhood and early adolescence in Canada before returning to the United States with his family at the age of 16. Although equally comfortable with both the U.S. and Metric systems of measurement, David strongly prefers to use the Metric system whenever possible. I share his preference as well.


Q:        Where did you come up with the idea for the “2-Meter Rule”?


A:        I came up the idea after reading an online article in the Myrtle Beach Sun-News, dated 28 March 2008, mentioning such legislation pending in the South Carolina State Assembly. Ohio and Missouri are the only states with such a law on a statewide level. There are cities and counties throughout the United States, such as Detroit, MI, Colorado Springs, CO, and El Paso, TX, that have enacted similar ordinances.


Q:        Is the character of David Lawrence a thinly-disguised version of you?

A:        David is very similar to me in many ways, except with a few biographical details changed around. He is best described as the man I want to become. He and I share many of the same quirks, hopes, dreams, and desires. Readers are encouraged to pay particular attention to David’s character in order to get to know me better.



Q:        Why did you write the diagnosis of Asperger Syndrome into David’s character?


A:        I wrote the diagnosis into David’s character order to raise awareness of this neurological condition. I am currently researching and writing a book on Asperger Syndrome from a deeply personal perspective, having the condition myself. My goal is to complete this book in the end of 2012.

Questions About "Topless Delivery"




Q:   How did you come up with the title “Topless Delivery”?

A:   The title “Topless Delivery” is actually a double entendre. Is the driver topless, or is his delivery vehicle topless? The latter is actually the case. David drives a dark grey 2003 Mitsubishi Eclipse convertible, the perfect car for those hot summer days in Myrtle Beach. I know from experience. I bought mine in Myrtle Beach in May 2007 and drove it until it was totaled in July 2009. I replaced it with a black 2004 Mitsubishi Eclipse convertible, which I still drive today.

Q:   What motivated you to write this book?


A:    After a long delivery career spanning nearly 20 years, including 3 summer seasons in Myrtle Beach, I decided to write a novel based on some of my experiences while I was living and working in Myrtle Beach.

Q:    How would you describe the genre of this book?


A:    I would describe this book as a three-way hybrid of romance, erotica, and documentary with some humor thrown into the mix.

Q:    What is the central theme of this book?


A:    The central theme of this book is change; specifically the changes that our narrator, David Lawrence, seeks to make in his life and his career as his 40th birthday fast approaches. Ashley Cooper is also seeking to make some changes to her own life as she turns 30. They find in each other the strength they need to make those changes in their lives.

Q:   What is the significance of the sex scenes throughout the book?

A:    The significance of the sex scenes revolves around the rediscovery of David’s manhood after many years of repression, both internal and external, due to his limited social skills resulting from Asperger Syndrome as well as his strict Catholic upbringing. Many of the ladies around him see him as a nice guy and a good friend, but never as a potential date. Ashley, as an exotic dancer and model, has exactly the opposite problem. Many men see her as a potential sexual conquest and not much more. Their relationship evolves over the course of the book from a purely sexual fling into something much deeper as they learn from each other what true love and friendship are really all about. Writing these sex scenes tastefully and without using any profane language proved to be my greatest challenge in writing the book.

Q:    How did you develop the character of Ashley Cooper?

A:     I derived the name “Ashley Cooper” from the names of two rivers in South Carolina, the Ashley River and the Cooper River.  Ashley Cooper is the embodiment of my ideal woman. She is beautiful, brilliant, sweet-natured, and possesses a great sense of humor.

Q:    Is the character of David Lawrence a thinly-disguised version of you?

A:    David is very similar to me in many ways, except with a few biographical details changed around. He is best described as the man I want to become.  He and I share many of the same quirks, hopes, dreams, and desires.  Readers are encouraged to pay particular attention to David’s character in order to get to know me better.


Q:    Why did you write the diagnosis of Asperger Syndrome into David’s character?

A:     I wrote the diagnosis into David’s character order to raise awareness of this neurological condition. I am currently researching and writing a book on Asperger Syndrome from a deeply personal perspective, having the condition myself.  My goal is to complete this book by the end of 2012.

If you have any questions about the story that are not answered here, please be sure to ask them in the comment section of this blog post.  Thank you for your input and support.